2016年托福写作点睛：名言和话题

　　Sample

　　one(适用于有一些背景or有一个中心词而且编得出来那个quotation的所有情况(二选一，agree

　　or disagree,除了个别);

　　要做的：想一句简单的背景+编一句名言+改写两次题目

　　On

　　contemporary society(一般的背景)/

　　With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information

　　explosive era(与科技有关的背景)，XX(中心词)serves as a catalyst for our future

　　success/XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important

　　role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./很简单的一句背景 ,However,people(universities,

　　government, citizen, society,) are/is invariably faced with such a question/

　　can’t help wondering:改写题目1.Confucian

　　(Yu Qiuyu,

　　Mark Twain, William Shakespeare), (one of) the greatest and most influentialChinesephilosophers (scholars, educators, writers, thinkers, statesmen), has

　　insightfully commented, “___编____”I

　　cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment gives the answer to this

　　question:改写题目2. Among countless factors which contribute to

　　my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾,且如果字数够了这一句就不要)

　　第二种是不需要编名言，或者适用于比较非正式的话题。

　　Sample

　　two：(如果sample

　　one的名言编不出来或者不适合编如leisure

　　time，就用下面的)

　　要做的：想一句简单的背景+改写两次题目+总起(最后写)

　　On

　　contemporary society(一般的背景)/

　　With the advent of the technologically advanced society / On account of …，XX(中心词)serves as a catalyst for our future

　　success/XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important

　　role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./ 很简单的一句背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also).However，when it comes to the choice between

　　AA and BB/When asked about whether改写题目1, people get into a dilemma.

　　According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my

　　perspective, I cling to an unshakeable belief that改写题目2.以下最后决定怎样写：Among

　　countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous

　　ones(最后一定排比结尾)/AA not only…but also(2)/There are various merits

　　AA brings about, first of all, to…; secondly, to…;and lastly….

　　开头段之后就是中间段落的论述：

　　2、分点一：分层论证 Basic to any understanding of the

　　benefits we can get from _______ is that__________/ First and foremost, On one

　　hand_________, On the other hand_________ Besides/ What’s more/ In

　　addition. 这一段主要说理，在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节，重点是要用一些精华句子!

　　3、分点二：举例论证 Further leading credence to my

　　position is that____________ (简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话)I can

　　think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子) / A

　　case in point is that(不是很典型)________，一句话总结例子：As a

　　result,强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样