2016年托福作文冲刺高分作文赏析（六）

　　Independent Task

　　Nowadays, children rely too much on thetechnology, like computers, smartphone, videogames for fun and entertainment; playingsimpler toys or playing outside with friendswould be better for the children's development.

　　范文赏析

　　For parents, how to well plan their children's development has been a huge problem. Whilesome children are given more time on technological gadgets, others are more inclined tochoose some activities, such as going camping or traveling. For me, the former option would bea better one.

　　Admittedly, playing simpler toys or playing outside might be good choice for children. Simpler toys, namely Lego, are a good way to develop children's thinking on solving theproblem through block by block. By assembling the pieces for different blocks, children couldassemble an even big piece, such as the classic London Tower Bridge. Also, playing withfriends is helpful. When they are playing with others, they would cooperate with them toplaying sports or even solve problems. However, on balance, both of these ways are limited inhelping children. Toys and outdoor activities are restrained to their actual forms: parents needlots of money to buy different toys to help children develop, and they pay a great amount ofmoney on helping their children for different activities. For those parents who suffer fromfinancial burden, these are not effective ways for children's development. Comparatively, technology would be a more effective way for children.

　　Firstly, Internet via computers and smartphone are essential for their development. Inother words, Internet provides students with vast amounts of information. According to arecent survey conducted by Gallup, after polling thousands of students from local high schools, most respondents claim that Internet is the No.1 helper from them to finish homework. Whenthey have problems, they would search reference on Internet. Websites such as Google Scholarwould be a wonderful tool for them to find some papers or academic reference for theirhomework. Meanwhile, Internet is a wonderful place for them to entertain as well. They couldwatch movies on Youku.com. They could even find interesting stories on sina.com. All funnyexperiences are available on Internet without causing children too much money.

　　In addition, video games are also necessary for children's growth. When children areplaying video games, they might learn some strategic thinking. For example, when I amplaying FIFA 2016, I have to manage my team members according to their physical strength sothat I could beat other teams. For those who run quickly, it would be a good idea for them toplay forward; for those who are tall and strong, they would be better playing middle field. Because of this team management strategy, I have achieved many titles in the game. Learningfrom this, I would allocate my time in finishing homework according to my energy level. WhenI am energetic, I might choose the most difficult homework; if I am tired, I might choosesome easy-to-do tasks, which would not cost me much time.

　　To conclude, while playing toys or spending time on outdoor activities is a good way fortheir development, technology would be better way.