托福写作—观点片段汇总分析

　　托福写作—观点片段汇总分析

　　1、同意上大学好

　　(1)为未来工作进行准备

　　(2)交更多的朋友，学习他们的思维方式

　　(3)系统的学习知识

　　I think going to the college is the better policy.

　　First, preparing for you future career by learning the basic knowledge will increase your competitive power. The college is the best place where can supply you with the background knowledge of your future career.

　　Second, you can make more friends and learn the way of their thinking. You will be influenced by intellectual companions. You can also build up your social network in your college and make your friends be your resources.

　　Last, you can benefit from going to the college by learning the knowledge in a systematic way which is more efficient.

　　2、同意父母是最好的老师

　　(1)父母从小就和我们在一起，给我们很多的知识

　　(2)父母和我们最为亲密，在任何时候，都会毫无保留地给我们知识

　　(3)父母最了解我们，所以他们给我们的建议和意见都是最有针对性的

　　I totally agree with that parents are the best teacher.

　　First, they raised us up thus spending the most time with us. During the process, they teach us every tiny things in daily life.

　　Second, they are most intimate to us and generous to give us the knowledge and lessons whenever, whatever, wherever we need.

　　Last, they are the people who know us best, the suggestions and advices they give can result in the solutions we need based on the specific situation of our own.

　　3、食品容易保存将改变人们的生活习惯

　　(1)食品容易准备，节省了大量的时间，使人们可以做其他事情

　　(2)食品容易准备，为人们提供了更多的花样。

　　(3)食品容易准备，为人们的健康带来了很多好处

　　Easy to prepare food saves us amounts of time, (so we can do other things like studying, working or taking care of children. ) It releases people from the time-consuming cook process.

　　Second, the semi-prepared food also offers us with more choices. For instance, if I can only cook Chinese food, the microwave spaghetti sold in the supermarket offer me a new flavor.

　　Last, many people cook in an unhealthy way. We can benefit from the fast-preparing food cos they have been throng rigid quality and healthy tests before launching.

　　4、首先进行比较，然后说书是最重要的来源

　　(1)读书能够节省很多时间

　　(2)书是有系统性的，能够让人以很科学的方式迅速获得知识

　　(3)读书相对比较便宜和容易，而在寻 找经验则比较昂贵和困难

　　Book is more important source.

　　Reading saves you a lot of time while learning certain knowledge. However, learning by experience can be time-consuming. For instance, I want to handle the Microsoft excel. Learning by the teaching material is efficient.

　　Second, books are arranged in a systematic way which allows you to gain the knowledge scientifically and fast.

　　Last, reading is relatively easy and cheap but experiencing can be tough and expensive sometime. Like you want to know America, reading a book is much more economical than going there instead

　　5、先说明优势和劣势，让后说同意建一个工厂

　　(1)工厂能够吸收附近很多人进行就业，对地方的经济有很大的贡献

　　(2)建立工厂能够促使附近其他的商业发展，例如小商店，药店等等，这可以大大方便附近的居民

　　(3)建造工厂，赢利后，就可以向当地政府贡献税收，政府可以利用这些钱改善社区的服务

　　6、一个重要的改变就是改变环境，让它变的更好

　　(1)环境好能改善人的身体健康，很多人因为环境而生病

　　(2)环境好了，吸引更多的游客来旅游

　　(3)环境好能够促进经济发展，吸引更多的商人来投资

　　7、电影和电视影响人的行为

　　(1)电影和电视能够让人们迅速了解整个国家和世界，丰富人的知识，让人们更加乐观

　　(2)电影和电视让人变的懒惰，不愿意和人接触

　　(3)电影和电视让人变的violent