Describe a time you moved to a new home or school
You should say:
When did you move
Where did you move
Why did you move
How did you feel about the moving
故事线:我的朋友琳达忍受不了之前的邻居,于是搬去了郊区,琳达必须开车20分钟才能到杂货店。但她并不介意,因为她可以住的比以前更宽敞。
高分语料:The new accommodation she moves to is in a suburb. Linda has to drive 20 minutes to go to the grocery store. But she doesn't mind it because she can live in a bigger than before. When she looks out of the window, she can see the flowers and cute birds flying in the sky. The only thing should be improved of her new accommodation is the blue-color stars all over the walls. Although they glow in the dark, during the day they make her feel depressed. Therefore, she plans to add some posters on them.