2016年雅思考试作文备考范例(9)

　　1. 句法：

　　1)简单句：主流句型，主要结构会使用就可以了。

　　1. 主谓(宾)，例如：

　　人们在这个问题上的观点不一样。

　　People have different views on this question.

　　People’s ideas vary/differ on this issue.

　　2. 主系表，例如：

　　Generation gap is a problem that we are confronted by.

　　Generation gap is now a problem we have to face.

　　The environmental problem is a serious problem in modern society.

　　The argument is convincing.

　　切记：不能出现没有谓语，或者双谓语的情况，否则不能超过5分!!!

　　2)并列句：

　　And, but, or

　　both…and…,

　　not only…but also…,

　　neither…nor…,

　　either…or…

　　主语，谓语，宾语，状语

　　连接词放在动词或形容词的前面

　　主语+谓语 + by either doing A or doing B

　　主语+谓语not only in terms of A, but more importantly/seriously，in terms of B

　　Most children are spoilt, not only in terms of care and attention, but more seriously, material ways.

　　很多小孩被溺爱，不但在关心和照顾方面，而且，更严重的是，在物质方面。

　　句子 + by either doing A or doing B

　　通过鼓励学生穿精心设计的校服或者引导他们参加一些能体现出团队精神的活动，学生的行为可以得到逐步的改善

　　Students’ behaviors can be improved by either encouraging students to wear well-designed uniforms or guiding them to participate in activities which reveal the spirit of team work.

　　肥胖症可以减轻，方法是不但要养成良好的饮食习惯，而且要多做运动，比如慢跑，跳绳等等。

　　Obesity can be relieved by not only forming good dietary/eating habits, but more importantly taking more exercises, such as jogging and rope skipping.