2017年6月大学英语六级作文精讲范文五十
cet6六级级作文范文:health and wealth, which do you prefer?你喜欢健康还是财富
health and wealth, which do you prefer?
“ health is wealth !”. t his is an old saying which the majority applaud . as a rule , the wealthier you ar e, the weaker is your health , but this cannot be applied to all .
to begin with , a per son that has health can afford to challenge all ha rdships . for example , manual worker s ar e us ually stout and energetic . with their energy , they earn their living . although such an occupation brings little reward as compa red with the energy they have exe rted , they enjoy life whateve r things may be .
moreover , business is based on health . students in good health can absorb knowledge mor e r eadily . in good health , scientists can tackle complex technical problems and achieve more success .
fr equently we find millionaires cling close to their doctors for they seldom have enough exercises to bring for th bet terhealth . their lack of exercises slackens the r eadiness of growth of the antibodies to resist the at tack of diseases . so , my argue is that health is mor e important than wealth for if we do not have health , wha t can we benefit from wealth ?
cet6六级作文结构分析:
· health is wealth
* mor e wealth , weaker health
· good health can afford to challenge all hardship s , e .g .
* man ual wor ker s
* businessmen
* students
* scientists
* millionaires lack health
· conclu sion
no health , no wealth
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cet6六级作文内容分析:
本文是一篇议论文, 文中作者的观点鲜明, 全文均围绕这一观点展开, 每段的第一都是主题句, 结论句与第一句呼应, 这种首尾呼应的写作技巧很值得学习。
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cet6六级作文万能句型:
applaud v . 赞同
cannot be applied to all 并不适用于所有人
hardship n . 困难
manual worker 体力劳动者
stout and energetic 健壮而精力充沛
ea rn their living 谋生
occupation n . 职业
the ene rgy they have exe rted 所出的力
absorb v . 吸收
tackle v . 解决, 处理
cling close to their doctors 总离不开医生
slackens the readiness of growth of the antibodies 放松体内增长抗体的准备