2019年大学英语四级写作练习题：责任感

2019年大学英语四级写作练习题：责任感

　　大学英语四级写作练习题

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled College Students' sense of Responsibility. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

　　1.有的大学生有很强的责任意识，有的却连最基本的责任感都没有;

　　2.大学生肩负些哪责任;

　　3.大学阶段是大学生成长的重要阶段，呼吁大学生加强责任感。

　　大学英语四级写作参考范文

　　Our times witness a striking difference between two groups of college students: those who bear a strong sense of responsibility and those without even a slightest one.

　　Perhaps some are still wondering--what obligations are undergraduates supposed to take? Obviously, all adult citizens should be responsible for themselves, their families, their societies and their nations. We university students are no exception. Besides, we are expected to be responsible for the institution where we are being educated.

　　Years at college are the most important period in a person's growth, when we acquire knowledge and find our roles in life, so we must enhance our obligation sense at this crucial moment in order to fulfill our duties well as individuals and members of our families, our schools, our society and our country.

　　大学英语四级写作评析

　　本文开头段只用了一句话就说明了提纲中的差距：有的大学生有很强的责任意识，有的却连最基本的责任感都没有。其中动词witness的拟人法使用、短语a striking difference(显著的不同)、strong与slightest形成的强烈对比以及responsibility和one实虚词结合，都是亮点表达。而两类人的定语分别使用了定语从句who bear a strong sense of responsibility和介词短语without even a slightest one，体现了句型的变化多样。

　　第二段虽然不长，但是段首过渡句Perhaps some are still wondering-what obligations are undergraduates supposed to take?的使用，承上启下，十分自然地引出段落主题：大学生肩负哪些责任。随后给出四个答案：成年公民都应该承担自我责任、家庭责任、社会责任、国家责任。大学生也不例外。而为了突出大学生和一般成年公民的区别，还用Besides补充了“学校责任”。

　　尾段强调了大学时期在人生中的重要性，并呼吁为了很好地履行我们作为个人以及家庭、学校、社会、国家的成员的职责，我们要加强责任感的培养，呼应第二段。全文以主人公的形象论述，有说服力。

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