Mary is my best friend. We’re all from Henan, 1. _____
but now I live in Beijing when she lives in 2. _____
Guangzhou. We don’t look each other very often, 3. _____
but we’re keep in touch all the time. I often write 4. _____
to Mary and telling her about the things that 5. _____
are happened at my company, and she often 6. _____
writes to me about her work. We talk on phone 7. _____
once a week. Sometime I call her on her 8. _____
car phone, or we send e-mail to each other. 9. _____
We’re really luck. There are so many ways 10. ____
we can keep in touch with each other.
【答案解析】
1. all改为both。指Mary和作者两个人。
2. when改为and或while。因为两个分句没有主从关系。而是并列关系,或者有对比或对照的含义。
3. look改为see。因为此句意为“两个人不能经常见面(see)”。
4. 去掉keep或把we’re改为we。因为keep是动词,若不是进行时态或被动语态,动词前不用be,但句中没有动词时必用be。所以去掉keep或去掉are,
5. telling改为tell。tell和write是并列谓语。
6. happened改为happening。因为这是现在进行时态。
7. phone前加the。因为on the phone是习语,意为“用电话(交谈)”。
8. Sometime改为Sometimes。此处表示“有时候”,而不是表示“某个不定的时候”。
9. 此行正确。
10. luck改为lucky。用形容词作表语。