2018年托福写作黄金句型(4)
句型4
原文材料:
Meanwhile, cars themselves are becoming computers on wheels, with operating system updates coming wirelessly over the air.
推荐句型:
with+n./pron.+doing
推荐理由:
两个主语发出两种动作,这两种动作又几乎同时发生,你会怎么写?打赌80%的同学都是The economy is developing fast, but the environment is deteriorating. 为了增强句式变化,我们可以使用一个with的复合结构,把其中一个主语和动作塞进复合结构里。
原创例句:
1. Urban residents find it more difficult to raise children than five decades ago, with living cost and tuition hitting all time high.
2. Fresh grads in first-tier cities nowadays find themselves more pressured than ever before,with competition in the job market growing increasingly stiff.
3. This is due to the fact that students can retrieve information and obtain knowledge from various sources other than teachers, with new media advancing continuously these years.
学以致用:
1. It is easier for parents to raise children than 50 years ago.
过去人们一直抱怨计划生育政策,但是开放二胎之后却没多少人生。生孩子就那么分分钟的事儿,为啥没人生呢?不好养呗。奶粉贵不贵,上学贵不贵,所以就像第一个例句说的,随着生活和教育成本再创新高,城市居民发现抚养孩子比五十年前难多了。
2. The rules the whole society expects young people to follow are too strict.
近来找过工作的年轻人肯定都感受到了这个社会森森的恶意,随便一家很水的公司招聘都要3、5年的工作经验,这么苛刻的规则还让不让我们新毕业的菜鸟玩儿了?所以这一题我们举双手双脚赞成,如例句二所说,工作市场竞争的激烈指数一路飙升,让一线城市的小鲜肉们感受到了史无前例的压力。
3. Teachers today are less appreciated and valued than in the past.
身为老师我只能为这题含泪点赞,随着新媒体的发展,学生们翅膀硬了,有度娘有谷歌,哪里不会点哪里,谁还在乎老师呢。