2018年托福写作黄金句型（2）

2018年托福写作黄金句型（2）

　　句型2

　　原文材料：

　　As human behavior is tracked and merchandized on a massive scale, the Internet of Things creates the perfect conditions to bolster and expand the surveillance state.

　　推荐句型：

　　As…, …creates perfect conditions to...

　　推荐理由：

　　在开头lead-in的部分，很多同学为了避免唐突尴尬会说“随着时代发展社会进步人民生活水平提高”等等废话，那么上面这个句型可以让我们的cliche变得稍稍不那么low。

　　原创例句：

　　1. As information technology continues to progress, social network sites create perfect conditions for malicious hackers to access privacy that we have no intention to reveal to strangers.

　　2. As people’s philosophy of education evolves, wealthy parents now create perfect conditions for their children to learn both liberal arts and science, so that they can build a well-rounded personality from an early age.

　　3. As technologies develop rapidly, instant communication tools create perfect conditions for young people to keep in touch with their old friends, no matter how far they are apart from each other.

　　学以致用：

　　1. Some people record experience by sharing picture or other information on social network sites, while others don’t like to share. Which do you prefer?

　　这道题在大规模好莱坞女星艳照泄漏之后出显得特别与时俱进。在社交网络上，你是一个闷骚潜水员，还是一个爱秀直播逼呢?如果选择前者，我们在引入话题时就可以用上例句一，随着信息技术不断进步，社交网站给腹黑的黑客们提供了完美的条件去窥探我们无意向陌生人透露的隐私，所以我们最好还是不作不死。

　　2. Young school children should be required to learn art and music in addition to science, math, history and language.

　　随着教育观念的一步步革新，家长们不再是拿着鸡毛掸子逼孩子学习的角色了，他们也意识到了素质教育的重要。但是主课之外的音乐美术等等也不是谁都学得起的，于是家底厚实的爹们为他们的公子千金创造了完美的条件来学习人文和科学知识，这样就可以早早培养孩子们健全的人格。

　　3. Moving to a new town or country is not a good thing because people will lose their friends.

　　搬去新的国家或者城市是不好的，因为会跟朋友失联?四处浪的年轻人肯定觉得这是BS，现在沟通这么方便，怎么会失去朋友呢?所以，如例句三所说，随着科技迅速发展，即时通讯工具给年轻人与旧友交流创造了完美的平台，无论他们相隔多远。所谓但愿人长久，千里聊QQ。