第二种是不需要编名言,或者适用于比较非正式的话题。
Sample
two:(如果sample
one的名言编不出来或者不适合编如leisure
time,就用下面的)
要做的:想一句简单的背景+改写两次题目+总起(最后写)
On
contemporary society(一般的背景)/
With the advent of the technologically advanced society / On account of …,XX(中心词)serves as a catalyst for our future
success/XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important
role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./ 很简单的一句背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also).However,when it comes to the choice between
AA and BB/When asked about whether改写题目1, people get into a dilemma.
According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my
perspective, I cling to an unshakeable belief that改写题目2.以下最后决定怎样写:Among
countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous
ones(最后一定排比结尾)/AA not only…but also(2)/There are various merits
AA brings about, first of all, to…; secondly, to…;and lastly….
开头段之后就是中间段落的论述:
2、分点一:分层论证 Basic to any understanding of the
benefits we can get from _______ is that__________/ First and foremost, On one
hand_________, On the other hand_________ Besides/ What’s more/ In
addition. 这一段主要说理,在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节,重点是要用一些精华句子!
3、分点二:举例论证 Further leading credence to my
position is that____________ (简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话)I can
think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子) / A
case in point is that(不是很典型)________,一句话总结例子:As a
result,强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样