2016年6月18日雅思考试真题写作(新东方版)

　　2016年6月18日雅思考试真题写作(版)

　　Task 1 柱图 宁波 汪宇红

　　The table gives information about annual salaries of five employment sectors in Australia in 2006.

　　分析：静态表格，如果只是一味地描写数据，肯定得不了高分，静态数据图的关键在于寻找数据之间的关系，并且用不同的句式表达出来。

　　Sample answer

　　The table compares how much Australians earned in five different employment sectors in the year of 2006.

　　Salesmen were more likely to get the highest income of $216,100, when compared with people in other industries, while the lowest minimum salary could also be found in this sector. The gap between the maximum salary and the minimum salary was smaller in engineering, with $145,080 and $38,500 respectively. The employees in IT and telecommunications also earned a great amount of money. The maximum salary was up to $100,080, which was about three times as much as the minimum salary. The figures for education and traveling were similar, with maximum salary standing at around $68,000 and minimum standing at approximately $32,000.

　　In these five sectors, the average wages of IT and telecommunications was $79,000, which was just second to that of engineering ($80,000). The people recruited in sales area earned $70, 000 on average. When it comes to education and traveling, the average salaries were much lower ($50,000 and $45,000 respectively).

　　Overall, the people in the industries of sales, engineering and IT and telecommunications earned much more than those in the other employment sectors.

　　Task 2

　　分析：

　　题目的类型属于report。 话题类别属于犯罪与青少年教育。在段落分配上，原因为一段，措施为一段，或者原因及其对应措施为一段。

　　范文主体思路分析：

　　原因一：不稳定的家庭因素导致，父母以暴力方式教育孩子给孩子留下不好的影响

　　对策一：父母改变沟通交流的方式，多和孩子交流互动，更多关心爱护孩子尤其是情绪上的需要

　　原因二：过度的媒体暴力，孩子们自制力的缺乏容易模仿荧幕里的英雄们的暴力行为

　　对策二：政府可以建立起荧幕审查与分级制度，控制荧幕上的暴力数量

　　考生关注：

　　2016年雅思考试时间和费用调整通知 　雅思考试官网报名入口

　　雅思报名官网打不开怎么办？　雅思考试网上报名网站：教育部考试中心

　　雅思考试报名截止日期怎么计算　 雅思退考如何申请？

　　雅思成绩多长时间有效？      2016年雅思考试费用调整为人民币1850元  

　　2016年雅思考试成绩查询入口　雅思考试停止使用一代身份证参考

　　In recent years, the proportion of crimes committed by teenagers has increased dramatically and thishas caused a widespread discussion. Media violence and unstable family life may be the two main factors leading to adolescents’ criminal tendency. Both of them will be discussed in detail below, followed by solutions.

　　The lack of family life should take responsibility for juvenile delinquency. Most parents educate their children in an impropriate way like beating and abusing. Even now, may parents still hold a view that a good son is a product of the rod. This educational method will leave children a misleading impression about violence when they are very young, and they are more likely to become real offenders in the future. To solve this problem, parents should adjust parenting at home, interacting with theirchildrenmore frequently and giving more attention and care especially emotional needs.

　　Excessive exposure to media violence also plays a big role in the increase of youth crime. As we all know, the violence shots are prevalent in many films and TV games, which affects young people the most. Teenagers who lack self-discipline tend to imitate their fantasy hero’s criminal behavior after watching action films in real situations. Actually, these teenagers are misled by their heroes. In this case, the government should set a rating and censorship system in order to control the amount of violence, threat and horror on screen.

　　In conclusion, family life and media violence are main triggers of juvenile delinquency. Parents should transform their ways to care and educate their children. Meanwhile, governments should provide a healthy environment on the screen.