2018年12月15日雅思写作考试回忆及解析

2018年12月15日雅思写作考试回忆及解析

　　TASK 1

　　作文主题：The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture, services, industries in three countries in 1980 and projected distribution in 2020.

　　写作要点：本次考察的是多柱图的动态图，虽然只有两个时间点，但考生一点要注意到使用动态图的方法来进行写作，国家内部每一项可以进行趋势描写，国家之间可以进行关键数据的比较，时态方面要注意到使用现在完成时、一般过去时、一般将来时，因为时间有将来的部分。

　　TASK 2

　　In some cities, there are few controls over the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, so people can build in whatever style they like. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages ?

　　题目分析：

　　题目类型：文化类&城市建设类

　　提问方式：优缺点类

　　Since diversity has arisen a fierce discussion among the group who wants to be different from others, and the distinctive aesthetics is being chased by more people, especially in some modern metropolises, which is reflected in the design of most building. I believe this can bring both benefits and drawbacks to the development of the cities.

　　The freedom of selecting the styles could make the society more diverse, which can embrace a variety of artists to come in and decorate the city with their talents; such phenomenon would be an effective way to promote the development of local culture and stimulate the competition between different artistic groups to inspire a more prospective cultural atmosphere. Besides, conducting the certain style in our buildings can be regarded as a release of our nature and personalities, about which most young people care in the modern world. And no one can deny that the sense of satisfaction brought by living in the building with our preference would not be replaced by other things.

　　However, the disadvantages in the society are looming. Nowadays, the city planners pursue a unified style in constructing an area, and the top concern for them is whether the new buildings could fit in the old ones, which might make the city look better in general, but contradicts the thoughts of former group mentioned. In addition, if a great number of styles were applied, it would have been harder and increased the cost for the later work of protection and maintenance.

　　In conclusion, what kind of styles people choose has both advantages and disadvantages, and the government should take different views into consideration, because to make our city better is the mutual purpose; to a certain extent, it can bring positive and unexpected results to give residents some freedom to meet their demands.