2017年雅思考试大作文素材运用锦囊（6）_第2页

　　【范文赏析】

　　【首段】 背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

　　Sure enough，with the availability of new technology, people may get a reasonable career in any favorite cities without considering regional limits. No matter where one dwells in, he or she can keep contact with their family members via the Internet or airplane timely. One of the traits of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in terms of selecting their dream jobs and places of residence. To voice my opinion, the merits of free job selection and multiple career choice prevail over its possible downsides.

　　【二段】 多元职业和候鸟生活之利好的展开

　　Seen from positive aspects, many benefits can be acquired. First，multiple career choice and constant change of residence means a broad range of working experience and constant refreshment. Meanwhile, one can become more talented and competent by taking up various jobs. Also, regular change of jobs makes one excel professionally and living in different cities greatly enriches one’s experience of the world. Hence，one can have brighter career and enjoy precious memory in the future. Last，to embark on more jobs in diverse cities enables one to have better personal resources. A well-connected interpersonal network，to some extent, indicates more splendid opportunities of job-promotion, comfortable salary and even the room for career achievement.

　　【三段】多元职业和候鸟生活之利好的展开

　　On the downsides, some problems might ensue. For a start, the decomposition of family bonds is an unavoidable risk due to the spatial separation. Imaginably, the face-to-face opportunities of communicating with relatives and friends will be reduced if people live too far. Further, every individual should assume the responsibility of getting married and starting his career, it might be hard for people to obtain the sense of well-being and enjoy a kind of stable life provided that they change place of working too quickly.

　　【尾段】 再次亮明观点

　　In closing，my stand is that it is up to us to find the means to achieve that happiness each of us long for, however, young people should be inspired to explore the unknown. That is the best way for them to deepen their insight into what they are hoping to do with their lives. Finding jobs and experiencing life in diverse cities exert many positive impacts on many people, especially for those who dare to challenge themselves.

　　【经典语料】

　　1. Young adults are generally intoxicated by splendid job opportunities and modernized lifestyle. 很多的年轻人是被更好的工作机会和更现代的都市生活吸引。

　　2. migrant lifestyle 候鸟式的生活

　　3. indicate long-lasting sense of refreshment 意味着持久的新鲜感

　　4. acquire various vocational skills 学习多样的职业技能

　　5. accumulate rich working experience and establish well-connected interpersonal network 积累丰富的工作的经验，建立广阔的人脉资源

　　6. spatial separation 空间的分离

　　7. familiar circle of friends 熟悉的朋友圈

　　8. the decomposition of family bonds 家庭纽带的分解

　　9. get married and carve out career 成家立业

　　10. It is up to us to find the means to achieve that happiness each of us long for 我们自己要寻找自己渴望的幸福的方式。