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3.短文写作

请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,有英语写一篇短文。

Questioning is a bridge to learning. When you begin to doubt something and search for an answer,you will learn.

注意:1.无须写标题;

2.除诗歌外,文体不限;

3.内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例;

4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;

5.词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

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【参考答案】

Questioning can lead to searching for an answer. If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.

Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer to a difficult math problem in class. Although the answer seemed a little strange, nobody but I doubted it. Thinking that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way. Half an hour later, I managed to find the correct answer. When I showed my answer to him, the teacher praised me for my independent thinking.

From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth.

【解析】

试题分析:本文是一篇“提纲类开放式”作文,沿袭了近几年的高考模式,要求根据提示,并结合具体事例,完成一篇英语短文。考生写作之前必须认真审题,注意描述具体事例时要用过去时态,人称用第一人称,内容紧紧围绕所给的主题,最后要有总结,形成首尾呼应。

【亮点说明】首句“Questioning can lead to searching for an answer.”鲜明地亮出了作者的观点。文章使用了状语从句“If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.”及分词做状语“Thinking that his solution might be wrong,…”等句型,为文章增色不少。此外,一些短语的使用也恰到好处,如offer sb. sth.,work sth. out,manage to do sth.,praise sb. for sth.,serve as等。

【考点定位】考查“提纲类开放式”作文。

【导师点睛】今年的高考短文写作仍然沿袭了近几年的模式,考生对“提纲类开放式”作文比较熟悉。考生答题时,先提取关键词question,doubt,learn来确定中心,确保不走题。通过英文提示,考生很容易得出这一观点:质疑既是求知的一种方式,也是“批判性思维”的起点。这对引导考生进行独立思考,发展批判性思维,培养创新意识,极具启发和指导作用。

4.书面表达 .请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章.

[写作内容]

1. 用约 30 个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;

2. 结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;

3. 根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。

[写作要求]

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3. 不必写标题。

[评分标准]

内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

【答案】

The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people’s lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.

Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. What’ s worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.

In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don’t secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody’s duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track. (150 words)

【解析】

试题分析:今年江苏高考英语采用了“材料类+图形+提纲类”形式,综合考查考生阅读材料,识图和写作能力,较往年有所创新,也增加了难度。材料分为三部分:第一部分讲述了一位老奶奶阻止车辆停放引发的争议。第二部分讲述了行人和自行车不遵守红绿灯,导致交通事故发生的现象。第三部分是图表和文字,

反映近几年车辆的数量激增现象。要求第一段用30个单词概括材料内容;第二段分析导致交通问题的原因;第三段从社会规则和个人行为谈谈启示(不少于两点)。

【亮点说明】范文严格按照“三步走”的格局,第一段用短短26字(不含标点)概括了所给材料,得益于使用了“not only…but also…”这一经典句型;第二段分析了导致交通问题的原因,使用了“give rise to, large-scale construction of, the increasing number of, (be) vital to”等高级词汇,同时“what’s worse”衔接词的恰当使用使该段条理清晰。第三段句型多样,变换使用了“Without虚拟语气,it is…who…强调句型,it is one’s duty to do sth.”等句型,为文章增色不少。

【考点定位】考查“说明文类材料+图形+提纲类”作文。

【导师点睛】说明文类材料的概括方法:主题概括法 (段意合并法)。考生应抓住主题句(关键句),一般为文章第一段和各段第一句,然后进行段意合并,再用1-2个漂亮的句式整理成文;分析原因时,注意分条称述,并使用恰当的衔接词,但要避免落入俗套;谈论启示时注意句式的变换使用,避免句式的单一。另外,考生应尽可能多地使用一些高级词汇,为文章增色。

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