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It's a story about a 25yearold woman named of Emma. She told me she would like to be the artist, but she didn't know how. And she said during the last few years she has worked in a restaurant, waited tables. Anxious to make a change, she asked me in advice.
The following is my suggestions for young people like Emma. First, you should think of ways improve yourselves. It is possibly that you will have more chances if you get some training. Second, get to know more people. New friend bring new information. Last, work towards your goal. It won't take long after you achieve it.
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It's a story about a 25yearold woman named of Emma. She told me she would like to be artist, but she didn't know how. And she said during the last few years she worked in a restaurant, tables. Anxious to make a change, she asked me advice.
The following my suggestions for young people like Emma. First, you should think of ways improve yourselves. It is that you will have more chances if you get some training. Second, get to know more people. New bring new information. Last, work towards your goal. It won't take long you achieve it.
