5.【江西省吉安市第一中学2015届高三上学期第二次阶段考】
高三学生学习任务繁重。体育课已成为难得的放松时间, 可目前你们体育课内容单一有时甚至被占用。请你用英语写一篇短文给校报投稿, 词数不少于80内容应包括：
1. 目前体育课的现状
2. 你对此现象的看法
3. 提出一些合理的建议
Dear editorAs the college entrance examination is drawing near,________________________________
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Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear editor,
As the college entrance examination is drawing near. We senior high school students are occupied with busy work. To a certain extent, PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. However, it is a pity that our present PE class is quite dull and sometimes even replaced by other subjects.
Not only can PE class build our body but also can shape our personality. It serves to develop our awareness of cooperation and spirit of competition. Therefore, personally I hold the view that it would be a great loss to us students if it were replaced by other lessons. Meanwhile, I think the teacher can design and organize some fun sports besides dull field and track practice or ball games, where everyone can be involved and have fun as well. After all, not everybody thinks running, jumping or ball games appealing.
I hope PE class can not only enrich our school life but also enable everyone to find his or her own pleasure in it.
应该用现在时，第人称。约个词，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：are occupied with To a certain extent 、Not only引导的倒装句、which 和that引导的同位语从句、where引导的定语从句等都很不错。
6.【山西省大同一中、同煤一中2015届高三联考】
假如你是星海中学的李华。你打算高三毕业后去美国留学，想咨询你的美国笔友Mike，请你根据以下提示写一封信。
1.目的：增长见识，体验文化; 2.困惑：语言障碍，学业压力; 3.征求建议。
注意：1.词数不少于80 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。
Dear Mike,
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yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mike,
I’ve finally made my decision to go to America for further study after high school.
I’ve been longing to go to America, mainly for two reasons. One is that I can experience American culture, and the other is that I can broaden my mind in this country. But I have some worries. My English is a bit poor, especially spoken English. I’m afraid I’ll have trouble communicating. Besides, I may suffer from heavy pressure from college courses.
I hope you can offer me some practical advice. Look forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【解析】本题为书信写作，主要就去美国留学的相关事宜咨询笔友麦克。本题题目较为简单，文章的大致内容题目已经给出，主要做适当扩展即可。本文为经典的三段论式写作，第一段介绍背景，第二段介绍留学目的及困惑，第三段请求提出意见，结构清晰明了。第二段第二句One is that I can experience American culture and the other is that I can broaden my mind in this country.使用了that领导的表语从句，且是两个表语从句并列，同时还用了one…the other…句型表示一个…另一个….。本文短语使用很精彩，使用了be longing to渴望，have trouble doing…有困难…，suffer from忍受，皆是较好的短语。本文词语使用的亮点在于副词使用，如第一句I’ve finally made my decision，finally最终;第二段第一句mainly for two reasons. mainly主要是;第四句especially spoken English，especially特别是，这些副词的使用使得文章词汇特色顿时多样了起来，为文章增加一大亮点。总结：书信写作时注意文章结构，最好采用三段式，简洁明了。
考点：考查书信写作
7.【山东省实验中学第三次诊断考试】
假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid.Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。
ASSISI ANTS WANTED
Valuable chances ale open for high school graduates who are good at English.Their work is to tend the senior students during the break.
Requirements attached：
1.Good at English.
2.Experienced priority.
Contact us by e-mail：midesch@163.com.
注意：
1.短文词数100字左右;
2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称;
Dear Sir/Madam，
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper. I found this position quite appealing to me.
I’ve just graduated from high school. Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have previous experience. During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.
In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work. I’m available for interview at any time. It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.
【解析】
考点：考查应用文写作。
8.【辽宁省丹东五校协作体2015届高三期末考试】
假如你是李华，你向美国笔友Jack介绍你校开设的学生社团活动的情况，大致内容介绍：
1、活动对象：高一和高二学生;活动时间：每周二的三点钟以后。
2、 通过参加活动，你们的收获。
3、 你的感受。
注意：1、词数不少于100;
2、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数;
3、 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
Dear Mike,
Thank you for your letter asking about the club activities in our school.
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Li hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
Thank you for your letter asking about the club activities in our school .These clubs are set up by the Students’ Union and they are intended for students from Grade Two and Grade Three, open after 3 o’clock on Tuesday afternoon.
The club activities, aiming to offer students more opportunities to show their different talents, benefit us a lot. Taking part in club activities can help us to make new friends, expand our circle, and develop interpersonal skills. At the same time, these activities can help us to develop self-confidence, communicating with each other more easily. Besides, we have developed different skills and many interests, which enrich our lives.
In my opinion, I acquire more knowledge in an interesting way. Meanwhile, I bring myself more relaxation after hard study, which reduces my tiredness.
【解析】
