2017下半年大学英语六级作文范文：助学贷款

2017下半年大学英语六级作文范文：助学贷款

　　advantages of getting a loan from the bank for my studies 助学贷款的优势

　　i am a college student f rom a farme r’s family in a mountaineous area . a year ago , i was admitted to a famous univer - sity . befor e ente ring the unive rsity , i was told tha t the necessary expenses during my four year s’study would cost nearly fifty thousand yuan . my parents had collected all the money ther e was to collect , including the money bor rowed f rom their relatives , but it was hardly enough to meet the needs . t hen , good news came that i could resor t to the bank for a loan . i thought it was a good idea and so i did it .

　　my decision was based on the following con sider ations : first , with the loan i can pay the tuition and support my life on the campus .

　　secondly , i don’t have to depend on my par ents who are always wor rying about the enormou s family expenditur e .thirdly , i will always have the pr ess ure upon me which forces me to study the hard way .

　　four thly , i have to live a very simple life and save every coin possible . t o sooner liquidat e the debt , i sometimes work as a home tutor , sometimes a door-to-door salesman , sometimes a restaur ant waiter .

　　fifthly , while doing par t-time jobs , i have accumulated a lot of social experience , bitt er sometimes , sweet occasionally , but happy all the time .

　　i think the above ar e the advantages the loan f rom the bank has brought to me . t hey are beneficial not only to my studies at the unive rsity but also to my future career , because i firmly believe in the saying“ har sh life produces a diligent and intelligent man .”

　　cet6六级作文结构分析：

　　· 上大学需要费用

　　* 家庭困难

　　* 助学贷款好消息

　　·优点

　　* 付学费和生活费

　　* 不依赖父母

　　* 有压力感

　　* 生活俭朴, 勤工俭学

　　* 品尝社会百味

　　· 结论

　　* 艰苦的生活能培养出勤奋而有智慧的人

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　　cet6六级作文内容分析：

　　本文是一篇记叙文。作者以第一人称来写, 首先记叙希望助学贷款之由来, 主体部分列出了助学贷款之五大优点。最后一句引言“ 艰苦的生活能培养出勤奋而有智慧的人”结束全文。这类题目的写作必须整理出几条轻重相当的优点, 每条优点的表达意义要完整, 可用一句、两句或多句来写。本文较适合六级水平。

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　　cet6六级作文万能句型：

　　loan n . 贷款

　　mountaineous ar ea 山区

　　be admitt ed to 被录取入

　　expen se n . 费用

　　collect all the money there was to collect 收 集所有能收集到的钱

　　resort to 求助于

　　tuition n . 学费

　　family expenditure 家庭开支

　　study the ha rd way 努力学习

　　liquidat e the debt 偿清欠债

　　home tutor 家教

　　door- to-door salesman 上门推销员

　　accumulate v . 积累

　　social experience 社会经验

　　bitte r sometimes , sweet occasionally , but happy all the

　　time 时苦时甜, 但总是很快乐

　　beneficial a . 有利的

　　ha rsh life produces a diligent and intelligent man . 艰苦的生活能培养出勤奋而有智慧的人