2016年大学英语六级写作高分范文六

　　on perseverance毅力

　　behind eve ry great achievement in anyone ’ s life lies perseverance . we see this in every human endeavour . out -standing sportsmen spend all their time practising . t heir endurance is beyond imagination . the same is t rue of businessmen who build up for tunes . what we usually see a re their achievements , but once we go behind the scenes we will find that they have put in a lot of continual steady ef forts . we all have read of gr ea t musicians , write rs and inventors who have cr eated or discover ed br eakthroughs in human achievement . inva riably they have said that they owe all their success to per - severance . as to college students , quite a big number of them have become s ucces sful language lear ners through persever - ance , however , a cert ain group of them ju st stop half way and their pr evious effor ts turn out to be f ruitless .

　　of all the countless examples the saga of colonel saunde rs is perhaps one of the most outstanding . the 65-yea r-old man from kentucky had a dr eam to star t a chain of f ried chicken restaur ants all over the wor ld . to realize his dr eam, he knew that he needed a r estaurant owner to go into par tners hip with him to open the first restaur ant and to f ry chicken according to the secret recipe he had . colonel saunde rs had knocked on 1008 doors befor e he finally found his par tne r . it is doubtful whether many of u s would have had the pe rseverance to knock even a hundred doors .

　　from the above discu ssion we can draw a conclusion that success comes to anyone who keep s working pe rseveringly and lack of persever ance can only result in fru st ra tion and failure .

　　·in every human endeavour lies persever ance

　　* spor tsmen pr actising all the time

　　* bu sinessmen putting in a lot of effor ts

　　* musicians , writ ers , inventors created break throughs

　　* college students learning a language

　　· colonel saunders and kfc

　　· conclu sion

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　　cet6六级作文内容分析：

　　本文是一篇议论文。文中就“ 毅力”这一话题展开讨论并发表自己的看法。第一段中第一句为主题句, 以下的论述均围绕这一主题展开, 最后落实到学生学习一门语言必须有毅力才能成功。第二段中作者举了一个翔实的例子, 进一步论证毅力的重要性。最后一段结论是全文的归纳。全文用词得当, 语言流畅。

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　　cet6六级作文万能句型：

　　pe rseverance n . 毅力, 坚毅

　　human endeavour 人的努力

　　endurance n . 忍受力, 忍耐

　　beyond imagination 超出想像

　　the same is true of . . . ⋯⋯也情况相同

　　go behind the scenes 去幕后

　　br eak throughs n . 突破, 惊人进展

　　invariably ad . 总是, 不变地

　　stop half way 半途而废

　　turn out to be fruitles s 结果一事无成

　　saga n . 家世

　　colonel saunders 上校桑德斯

　　a chain of 连锁( 店)

　　go into par tners hip 合伙

　　sec ret recipe 秘方

　　fru st ra tion n . 挫败