2019年英语四级优秀作文指导：网上校园开放日

　　Campus Open Day on Internet

　　1. 目前有部分高校打造网上校园开放日，各院系入驻微博，为全国高考(微博)学生、家长和社会各界朋友提供全方位、立体化、跨时空的在线咨询服务;

　　2. 针对这一现象，有人认为此举甚好，节省资源;但有人认为网络交流效果会不尽如人意;

　　3. 谈谈你的看法。

　　Campus Open Day on Internet

　　【范文】

　　With the development of computers, some universities hold Campus Open Day on Internet. All faculties of these universities have microblog accounts which aim for offering comprehensive online consulting service for students and parents.

　　People hold different opinions to this phenomenon. Those who in favor of it think it can save both human resources and material resources. On the contrary, others dissatisfy with the results of online communication.

　　As to me, I think it is a convenient way for students to get useful and updated infomation about their interested universities. Students can obtain information more quickly and correctly, raise any questions they have casually and get answers more timely. But every coin has two sides. Meanwhile, related colleges and departments are called upon to actively involve themselves in strengthening the supervision regarding the authenticity of information shared and released.

　　【点评】

　　文章第一段介绍了部分高校提供网上校园开放日这一情况，然后在第二段分别叙述了人们对待此事的不同观点，第三段结合自己的观点对该现象发表意见并提出建议。

　　第一段中microblog accounts意为“微博账号”，后面涉及which引导的定语从句，其中comprehensive意为“全面的”，online consulting service意为“在线咨询服务”;第二段中in favor of意为“赞成”，dissatisfy with意为“对……不满意”;第三段中用了几个副词修饰，more quickly and correctly意为“更加迅速准确地”，casually意为“随意地”， timely意为“及时地”， strengthening the supervision意为“加强监督”。