2019年英语四级优秀作文指导：体能训练

　　Physical Training

　　1. 保持健康非常重要;

　　2. 据调查显示，大学生身体素质逐年在降低;

　　3. 谈谈在大学校园里进行体育锻炼的重要性。

　　【范文】

　　Physical Training

　　As the saying goes, happiness lies first of all in health. It is certain that health is more valuable than wealth and wisdom. Only with good health a person can achieve and realize his goals.

　　Recently, surveys showed that physical quality of college students declines year by year. In order to better serve for socialist construction, college studens should realize the importance of physical training.

　　Firstly, physical training helps to improve and maintain health as movement is the source of life. Facing with heavy burden of study, the students without strong physique could not gain success. Secondly, it enables college students to form good habits. What’s more, it can strengthen psychological quality. All in all, physical training will not only guarantee college students to live longer, but also let them enjoy the years they do live.

　　【点评】

　　文章由谚语开头，指出健康的重要性。第二段结合调查结果，说明大学生身体素质不断降低。第三段从大学生的角度列出进行体育锻炼的重要性：体育锻炼帮助改善健康状况;能使大学生养成良好的生活习惯;巩固心理素质。

　　第一段中“Only…can…”涉及倒装句型，Only放在句首，句子部分倒装;第二段中socialist construction意为“社会主义建设”;第三段中movement is the source of life意为“运动是生命之源”; strong physique意为“强健的体魄”; form good habits意为“养成良好的生活习惯”; psychological quality意为“心理素质”;All in all意为“总而言之”。