2015年6月英语四级作文点评之现代生活（网友版）

　　关于人与电脑这个话题，我们在谋篇构局的时候，可以按三段去写，开头部分一定要对图片进行描述，然后在中间段落展开(注意：本次图画侧重的是负面影响)，也可以从正反两个方面进行对比分析。在行文时，要注意文章的层次和逻辑梳理。

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　　首段：As is clearly depicted from a series of cartoons that a man is excessively dependent on the computer whether in working and playing or at home and sleeping. The impact of the computer on daily life is such seriousness that it is high time we paid attention to it.

　　展开段：In the first place, due to the wide application of the computer, some people called net friends always take priority over our family and friends in real life. The bulk of each day including our time and energy is spent on the Internet. What’s more, the Internet deprives us of the delight in communication with others. When taking to someone by us, we can hear their voices, see their expressions, and even hold their hands if we would like to. Last but not least, the computer will lead to a decline of our skills of face-to-face communication. Thus we may feel embarrassed and find it harder to communicate with people around us.

　　结论段：To sum up, we shouldn’t be dependent on the computer excessively. No matter how convenient and speedy it is, we should remember the advantage of face-to-face communication.