2012年6月大学英语四级作文范文及点评（上海新东方版）

过度包装，类似题目在多种类型的考试或者考试预测中出现过。做为一种语言考试，考生不用在意作文题目，因为说什么不重要，只要内容相关就可以了，重要的是对语言的把握。不是考what to say，而是考how to say。

首先，语言变化性。这个题目中出现频率最高的词，最好能用近义表达替代。如overly, redundant, wrap, container等。语言的变化性，在国内外考试中都是一个重要的评分项目。其次，避免错误。语言性的错误是难以让考官容忍的。四六级的通过，虽然不能证明您英语有多好，但能证明你英语不算差。所以错误的多少直接影响考生是否通过。www.examｗ.com

下面这个文章不能算是好文章，偶尔还有些不妥，但能是一篇较成功的应试文章，这个文章的句子和思维结构都可以在今天下午的六级考试中再次成功套用。模板，难以让您获得高分，但合格和中等是多半可行的。牢记，这只是一个语言测试。

把握好语言基础，掌握好应试技巧。

Today, people in growing numbers are beginning to realize the seriousness of prevailing using excessive packing. This is a matter of concerns in the commercial society. Certainly, there is a general discussion among people as to the view of redundant wrapping.

A number of reasons are responsible for this. To begin with, an increasing number of persons like the apparent beauty, and it may attract potential clients. In addition, a good-looking container is viewed as a high quality sometimes. What’s more, it is a waste of resources, but it is possible to gain more benefits than before. Besides, the community tends to accept this, which means more and more people are likely to use it. The above may be the cause for this issue.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that over-pack plays an important role in commercial sales. It is high time that effective actions should be taken to prevent this problem, though redundant wrapping is concerned as an art somehow.