2016年大学英语四级考前全真模拟试题及答案（二）_第5页

　　答案精析

　　Part IWriting

　　【范文】

　　Internet and the Distance among People

　　As we can see from the picture, Internet connects the human society together, but sadly, walls of barrier are estricting people in their own space.

　　It is undeniable that Internet has changed the way people live. With many programs such as instant messaging, online communities, micro.blogs and so forth, communication can nearly be carried out everywhere at any time. But despite the great convenience, we find the distance among people becomes farther, instead of nearer. We play online games and forget to call the family; we sit alone surfing the net with mobile phones when classmates are gathering together; children today often play with the tablet computers, rather than with other kids from the neighborhood.

　　In my view, we should use the Internet reasonably, and keep in mind that the real life is much more meaningful than the virtual one. To be closer to other people, we should talk with them, using our voice, instead offinger tips. And we should pass this idea on to the younger generation.

　　【译文】

　　互联网与人们之间的距离

　　正如我们从图片中所看到的，互联网将人类社会联系在一起，但悲哀的是，重重阻隔将人们只限制在自己的空间。

　　无可否认，互联网改变了人们的生活方式，有了即时通讯软件、网络社区、微博等等，交流可以随时随地实现。但尽管互联网带来了如此大的便利，我们却发现人与人之间的距离变得越来越疏远，而不是越来越亲近。我们可能只顾着玩网络游戏而忘了给家人打电话，也可能在同学聚会的时候独自坐在角落里用手机上网;如今的小孩经常是在玩平板电脑，而不是和邻居家的小孩一起玩。

　　在我看来，我们应该合理使用互联网，并且记住：真实世界要比虚拟世界更有意义。为了拉近与他人的距离，我们应该多用声音而不是用指尖与他们交流。而且我们应该将这一理念传递给年轻的一代。

　　【要点用法】

　　battier障碍onfine game网络游戏

　　undeniable无可否认的surf浏览;网上冲浪

　　instant messaging即时通讯软件tablet computer平板电脑

　　online community网络社区virtual虚拟的

　　micro-blog微博finger tip指尖

　　【句法点评】

　　1.As we can see from the picture，Internet connects the human society together，but sadly…

　　首段描述图画的内容，用connect…together表示“联系在一起”，用but sadly转入相反方面的事实。

　　2.It is undeniable that Internet has changed the way people live.

　　本句为it引导的主语从句，真正的主语是that后面的内容。Itisundeniable意为“无可否认的是……”，也可以替换为undoubtedly。

　　3.But despite the great convenience，we fmd the distance among people becomes farther，instead of nearer.despite意为“尽管”，表示让步，其后面可以直接接名词或名词短语。farther与nearer相对。instead of意为“而不是”。有强调的作用。

　　4....children today often play with the tablet computers，rather than with other kids from the neighborhood.ratherthan后面为避免重复，承前省略了play。“邻居家的孩子”即为kidsfromtheneighborhood。